July 14, 2019 by Peter Galen Massey
let the sun bring drought / and ruin come with the rain / i will plant my fields
Posted in Haiku | Tagged haiku, modern haiku, Poems | 1 Comment
Grade: C. I like the sentiment of this haiku but the poem is bombastic, nothing about the lines are interesting, and the nature theme is overused. This is a haiku I may eventually decide to unpublish.
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Grade: C. I like the sentiment of this haiku but the poem is bombastic, nothing about the lines are interesting, and the nature theme is overused. This is a haiku I may eventually decide to unpublish.