Peter Galen Massey

Posted in Haiku | Tagged haiku, Poems | 1 Comment

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1. on March 16, 2016 at 9:07 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey

   Massey Grade: C+

   Massey Comment: I like the words in this, but the syntax is scrambled to fit the form and it scrambles the sense as well, this haiku is nothing but description, and overall I feel like the Muse gave me a pitch to hit here and I just fouled the damn thing off instead of driving it into the right center gap and cruising into second with a stand up double.

   
   

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