Haiku | “the wail of a stranger’s grief”

the soft sirens cut / the deep night like the faint wail / of a stranger’s grief

Posted in Haiku | Tagged haiku, modern haiku, Poems | 1 Comment

on June 2, 2016 at 6:37 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey

Massey Grade: B-

Massey Comment: Three nouns with an adjective, all in a row? Inexcusable! But I ran out of time.

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