Grade: D. The only thing that makes this haiku good is how well it distills everything wrong with poetry. It’s trite and self-aggrandizing, with the breaks determined solely by where the line runs out of syllables. A reminder to myself of what not to do.
Lovely 🙂
Lovely :). Exactly what I needed to hear to continue sharing my writing
your poem from 2 years ago….. only now, do I find myself with time to do this.
Grade: D. The only thing that makes this haiku good is how well it distills everything wrong with poetry. It’s trite and self-aggrandizing, with the breaks determined solely by where the line runs out of syllables. A reminder to myself of what not to do.