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“clouds like mighty horses” | Haiku

January 28, 2016 by Peter Galen Massey

the clouds gallop like / mighty white horses across / the fields of the sky

Posted in Haiku | Tagged clouds, haiku, poems, poetry, the sky, writing | 3 Comments

3 Responses

on January 28, 2016 at 8:22 pm | Reply Azul Zaffre

Love this haiku.
- on January 28, 2016 at 8:49 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey
  
  And thanks again!
on February 4, 2016 at 11:03 am | Reply Peter Galen Massey

Massey Grade: B.

Massey Comment: This one is fine. It is purely descriptive, and leaves you nothing to unpack, but to the extent that the metaphor works and the poem gives you both a vivid image and a visceral sense of the clouds in motion on a day with wild, bright weather, I can’t knock it. The image is the actual clouds that sparked up the idea in me.

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