Haiku Poem | “the metal cars jerk and screech” | Peter Galen Massey

Haiku Poem | “the metal cars jerk and screech”

September 4, 2016 by Peter Galen Massey

blank masks of boredom / the metal cars jerk and screech / close heat, tang of sweat

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Posted in Haiku | Tagged haiku, modern haiku, Poems | 4 Comments

4 Responses

on September 4, 2016 at 12:16 pm | Reply Paul F. Lenzi

hits all my senses – nicely done
- on September 4, 2016 at 1:14 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey
  
  Thanks Paul!
on September 4, 2016 at 2:24 pm | Reply scooj

Excellent. I have this to look forward to tomorrow.
- on September 4, 2016 at 2:58 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey
  
  Thanks. I like the subway but then again I don’t have to take it every day.

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