Peter Galen Massey

Posted in Haiku | Tagged haiku, Poems | 1 Comment

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1. on March 13, 2016 at 10:04 pm | Reply Peter Galen Massey

   Massey Grade: B+

   Massey Comment: This seems like one of my better ones. Each line is a discrete unit and is stitched together with similarities in the sounds of the words (the “il” + “il” + “il” in the second line for example). The images are vivid and give you a feeling of the moment — particularly the sense of mystery and wonder in the scene. At least, so I hope.

   
   

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